[thelist] My very first site check!
Jacob Stetser
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Tue Jul 10 09:32:21 CDT 2001
Marc-
Thanks - yep, I wrote it in the 3rd person and missed a few things
when turning it to first. I've fixed them now, I think.
>Hi Jacob,
>
>Looks good. I think you need to check a few grammatical things on
>the 'who we are' page though.
>
>(I) wrangles, (I) programs, (I) dabbles, (I) understands are a few.
>There may be others. It looks like you pulled it from something
>previously written in third person and forgot to change some of the
>verbs.
>
>regards.
>-marc
>
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