[thelist] will you critique a my mockup?

Thanks Shelley, Alan, and others for your feedback.
Unfortunately this project was thrown together at the last minute and I'm
sub-contracting for this and haven't ever even met the client. I had 72
hours to create something based on a brochure of theirs. I'd agree that
it lacks a sense of elegance and feels a little dull. What I was able to
do can be seen at http://marcijewelry.com Send any other comments or
critiques you like. I definitely have my work cut out for me. I've used
too many fonts, the colors are too dark, the images are low quality since
I scanned them from print, and it lacks sophistication. But it's a start.
-Jim
delta_helix@juno.com