On 26/11/04 12:42 pm, "Alex Beston" <alex at deltatraffic.co.uk> wrote: > hi e-volt > > Was wondering if someone could have a look at: > > http://deltatraffic.co.uk/yell-ad/ad.gif > > thanks > Alex Alex Your ad doesn't seem to have a logical progression from key message to small print. I'd have put "...traffic magnet" message at the top, then your name then your tel and instead of using up the space in the bottom left with that graphic device, put your address on just 2 lines - use the width of the ad and save vertical space. The ad doesn't have a focus (a magnet that attracts your eye first). If anything, the tel is the most prominent. But the tel's irrelevant if you haven't grabbed someone's attention. Hope that's helpful -- Chris Price Choctaw Media Ltd chris.price at choctaw.co.uk http://choctaw.co.uk Tel. 01524 825 245 Mob. 0777 451 4488 A man can do nothing better than to eat and drink and find satisfaction in his work ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The information in the email (including any attachments) is confidential and intended solely for the use of the individual to whom it is addressed. Access to this email by anyone else is unauthorised. Any views or opinions presented are solely those of the author and do not necessarily represent those of Choctaw Media. If you have received this email in error be advised that any use, dissemination, forwarding, printing or copying of this email is strictly prohibited. Please notify the sender and please delete the message from your system immediately.