[thelist] ad help

David Siedband technique at oceanicsky.com
Sun Nov 28 03:50:12 CST 2004


I think you could strengthen the following tagline:  "Is your site a 
traffic magnet?"  The value proposition might not be clear to your 
potential clients.  Why is more traffic better?  Seems to me the value 
you're delivering is potential customers.  Maybe you could say 
something like:  "targeted traffic means customers finding you"
David Siedband

On Nov 26, 2004, at 4:42 AM, Alex Beston wrote:

> hi e-volt
> Was wondering if someone could have a look at:
> http://deltatraffic.co.uk/yell-ad/ad.gif
> thanks
> Alex

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