[thelist] ad help

[David Siedband]

Alex,

I think you could strengthen the following tagline:  "Is your site a 
traffic magnet?"  The value proposition might not be clear to your 
potential clients.  Why is more traffic better?  Seems to me the value 
you're delivering is potential customers.  Maybe you could say 
something like:  "targeted traffic means customers finding you"
--
David Siedband
generation-xml.com



On Nov 26, 2004, at 4:42 AM, Alex Beston wrote:

> hi e-volt
>
> Was wondering if someone could have a look at:
> http://deltatraffic.co.uk/yell-ad/ad.gif
>
> thanks
> Alex