[Marketing] beo changes

[Madhu Menon]

At 10:35 AM 6/24/2002, dave mclean wrote:
>Mind if I make some edits?

Ditto. I'm a language pedant, so I just have to be the PITA.


>Can we ditch the smiley?  :)

That's a good idea.


>If you would like to help support evolt.org and have the resources to share
>the Browser Archive load, you can read more about becoming a mirroring

Eliminate "help". You've already got support, which implies help.


>Testing with browsers from the archive keeps your clients happy and your
>service as a web developer professional. Read about <link>how you can
>support evolt.org</link>.

"AND your service as a..."? Doesn't make sense. Did you mean "with" instead
of "and"?

"... your services as a web *development* professional" would be more correct.


There, I'm done. Should we also have some text that says, "Supporters of
beo get credit for it with a text link, and this enhances your reputation
in the Web developer community"?

(Feel free to re-word, of course.)

Regards,

Madhu