Alex

You wrote:
> #1  "Is your site underperforming?"
> 
> #2 do you want more customers?
> 
> #3 Are you losing customers?
> 
> #4 Generate more paying customers?
> 
> #5 Is your website visible?
> 
> #6 How's your website?
> 
> #7 What's up with your 'site, man?
> 
> #8 Is your 'site letting you down?
> 
> which one do you like the most?

If this still refers to your yellow pages ad, I would say none of them. If a potential customer is browsing that particular section of the yellow pages, it may be safe to assume that the potential customer has already answered the majority of these questions himself. Perhaps you should concentrate more on telling the potential customer what you are specifically going to do for him that would make it worth his while to part with cash.

If you're embarking upon a career in marketing, would it not possibly be a good idea to learn a little bit about marketing before proceeding? It could save a whole load of hassle in the long run to get a bit of theory under your belt.

Regards

Chris Marsh
