[thesite] Headlines from evolt.org for 04-SEP-01
Michele Foster
michele at wordpro.on.ca
Mon Sep 24 22:20:00 CDT 2001
OK .. this is too wordy .. imho. I'd prefer it to be short and simple ..
one liners.
Here's my suggestions:
Intro...
There's new content available on the evolt.org site:
Ending...
Authors really appreciate feedback from their peers; you can leave a comment
and rate articles by logging into the evolt.org web site.
Happy reading!
evolt.org
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Michele
----- Original Message -----
From: "isaac" <isaac at members.evolt.org>
| Suggestions:
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| intro paragraph:
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| Hi evolters!
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| We have some fresh content on the evolt.org site today contributed by our
| members. Learn something new or review the perspective of someone else:
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| outro paragraph:
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| Of course, if you have some info to share, or questions to ask, authors
| would love you to add a comment. Also, all authors appreciate feedback, so
| be sure to have a look and leave your rating.
|
| The evolt.org web site is a companion resource to thelist, with articles
| written by the community members you often read and respect every day.
|
| Happy reading!
|
|
| evolt.org
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