[thelist] My very first site check!

Jacob Stetser lists at icongarden.com
Tue Jul 10 09:32:21 CDT 2001


Marc-

Thanks - yep, I wrote it in the 3rd person and missed a few things 
when turning it to first. I've fixed them now, I think.

>Hi Jacob,
>
>Looks good. I think you need to check a few grammatical things on 
>the 'who we are' page though.
>
>(I) wrangles, (I) programs, (I) dabbles, (I) understands are a few. 
>There may be others. It looks like you pulled it from something 
>previously written in third person and forgot to change some of the 
>verbs.
>
>regards.
>-marc
>

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