[thelist] Another Personal Site Critique

[joseph gannon]

Hi Peter

I am using a ISDN conneciton and think it took to long
to download. I am not sure why there is an Enter link
when I first visit the site.

I am unsure about "Desktop Exposition" as a label ..I
dont know what it means until I click it. Better to
descrive it on the index page. I would remove all that
introduction and create a small paragraph summary. No
need to clutter up the page. 

Put the email link and home in a separate category.
The user actions are different than the content areas.



--- Peter <lists at szaroconsulting.com> wrote:
> Hello Everyone!
> I have recently joined this list as would appreciate
> any input on my
> personal website. I'd appreciate some constructive
> criticism on layout,
> colors, and organization. The site is primarily
> designed for future
> employers, family and friends. Feel free to sign the
> guestbook! :-)
> 
> Browser, Resolution, OS, Connection speed?
> 
> http://peterszaro.com
> 
> Thank you in advance for your time and effort!
> 
> ~~~~~~~~~~~
> Peter
> 
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