[thelist] Your 2 cents - Site Critique
isaac
isaac at members.evolt.org
Wed Apr 10 19:16:01 CDT 2002
> http://www.solimarsystems.com
Hi,
It's a bit flat and bland. In your flash mid-pieces on the front door, make
your photos full colour. That will easily lighten it up.
You have massive alignment issues all over the place. Line the search box &
text up with the left edge of the logo's box in the top left. Redesign the
"configure your own system" button to use a full colour image, and to align
with the left edge of the search box.
The "legacy output experts" badge seems out of place.
I don't know what it is (some of your flash, I expect), but resizing the
browser seems sluggish and throws my CPU usage up near 100%.
I don't like the typeface used in the flash mid-pieces. Try something less
common looking.
Try pushing up the line-height on your body copy slightly. Give you
frontdoor paragraph a bit more padding at the top. Aim to have the distance
between the top of the paragraph and the box/circle emblem near the search
box and the copy, the same. Also, align the top of your search box/block
with the paragraph.
Try these things, and I think it'd be a start.
isaac
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