[thelist] UI: i find myself saying "click here" a lot.

Pat Meeks pmeeks at msn.com
Tue Aug 27 13:46:01 CDT 2002


> > A copy of our <a>Agency AB1127 Resource Book</a> is available free of
> > charge, or you can call us at (626) 334-6050 with questions.
> I am suggesting moving the free-of-charge closer to the front because it
is
> lost in the middle of your sentence.  In my example, the free-of-charge
was
> at the end, which makes it more noticable when scanning text.  In the
middle
> of the sentence, it tends to get lost.  This is, of course, assuming that
> free-of-charge is an important part of this offer.

To me "free-of-charge" is redundant. Wouldn't simply using "free" would
convey the same message?

Pat






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