[thelist] Flash anim critique

[Ed McCarroll]

Daniel,

Some of the wording is klunky, at least to my American eyes.  But
you asked about the animation, and on that subject, I can only add
my concurrence with what's already been said.

Contact me off-list if you want to translate it into:

  <oxymoron variant="double">
    good American English.
  </oxymoron>

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