[thelist] site check request (for my first interview!)

[Timothy J. Luoma]

On Fri, 02 Jan 2004 14:35:39 +0100, Kristof Neirynck  
<k.neirynck at belgacom.net> wrote:

> Much better.

Thanks, but "better" than the original isn't saying much.

> A few suggestions for <http://psv.tntluoma.com/contact/>:
> * Put "Title" before "Name" or even remove the "Name".
>    These people are representatives of a certain function.
>    It is the Pope, John Paul and not John Paul, the Pope.

Good thought.  I had thought about that but hadn't done it.

> * Get rid of the personal email adresses at once!!!
>    These will be bombarded with *SPAM* if you don't.
>    Add a mail form if you can or create special email adresses like
>    "Executive_Presbyter at presbsciotoval.org".

Yeah I know... they have been online for so long it's probably a lost  
cause for those addresses, but if we do get new addresses they'll  
definitely be behind a form.

> A few suggestions for <http://psv.tntluoma.com/churches/>:
> * The yellow background is a bit strong for a:hover.
>    There is nothing wrong with blue-red-purple links.
>    Especially since you're going for the minimalistic look.
>
> * The yellow for the h2 is a bit strong too.

I changed the yellow to #F0E68C;

> * Having a ul you don't need to have a "|" after each item.
>    Use a ul like this:
>      <ul><li>A</li><li>B</li>...</ul>
>    or "|" like this:
>      A | B | ...
> * The "A | B | ..." links could be repeated at the end of the document.

Hrm.  Would that satisfy the accessibility requirement for separating  
links?


> A few suggestions for <http://psv.tntluoma.com/pulpitsupply/>:
> * Adding anchors and links to them would make it easier to use.
>    Active Clergy | Retired Clergy | Certified Lay Supply Preachers | ...

Good ideas.


> Suggestion for <http://psv.tntluoma.com/presbytery/>
>   and <http://psv.tntluoma.com/council/>:
> * Add th's.
>    It might seem superfluous here.
>    But then again it always does.

Oops.  Had meant to include them.

TjL


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