[Theforum] Getting back to work

Shirley Kaiser, SKDesigns skaiser1 at skdesigns.com
Thu Jan 10 21:30:14 CST 2002

At 07:14 PM 01/10/2002, Michele Foster typed:

>The site's just about ready to roll over the code on teo to the live site.
>If you want, you can review the final version of the article I've prepared
>for when the code rolls.

Hi, Michele,

Reading along, I found just a few tiny little things to edit:

  .... Also, a new version of the source code has also been compiled and is 
available from soureforge.

Last word should be spelled sourceforge (the 'c' is missing from the page).

Then, in the bulleted list under Author Recognition

2nd bullet: directly underneath a graphical representation of the number....

I'd suggest changing that to:
a graphic representation of the number....

The first way I ended up thinking "Directly underneath a graphic 
representation of what?" I don't think the "directly underneath" is necessary.

4th bullet: date the user registered their evolt.org account;

Should be either
1. date the user registered his/her evolt.org account;
2. date the users registered their evolt.org account;
(user needs to agree with tense of his/her/their)

Next fix:

under - Other Modifications
Other less-noticeable changes

Should be
Other less noticeable changes (no dash)

That's it for now. Nice work Michele!



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