[Theforum] Re: print template description

[aardvark]

> From: "Warden, Matt" <mwarden at mattwarden.com>
>
> >""Evolt.org is an all-volunteer resource for web developers made up
> >of a series of discussion lists, member-submitted articles, a browser
> >archive, a resource directory, and member hosting."
>
> or, the grammatically-correct version:   :)
>
> "Evolt.org is an all-volunteer resource for web developers made up of
> a series of discussion lists, a database of member-submitted articles,
> an archive of web browsers, a directory of Internet resources, and a
> server of hosting accounts."

you ended that sentence with a preposition...

> though, "server of hosting accounts" could use work. that's all i
> could think of.

that one, too...

seriously, the shorter one is, well, shorter...