[Theforum] review for contribution page

Madhu Menon webguru at vsnl.net
Tue Mar 26 15:23:10 CST 2002


At 02:27 AM 3/27/2002, Daniel J. Cody wrote:
>http://members.evolt.org/contribute/
>
>hows the wording/grammer/spelling look?

It's spelt "grammar". ;)
Sorry to keep doing that to you Dan.

But... you asked for checks, so...

a) "contributions of it's members" - should be "its" (without apostrophe)

b) It's "monetarily"

c) "While we don't (and won't) ask..." - would be better as "While we don't
(and won't) ask for any set amount of money -- every bit helps after all --
ask yourself how much the services evolt.org and members.evolt.org
specifically are worth to you."

d) "Whether you think a $5 a month contribution or a $100 lump donation is
appropriate..." - "lump" should be "lump sum"

e) "The information provided below should guide whichever method..." -
should be "guide you"

f) "cashiers check" - shouldn't that be "cashier's check"? (Not sure.)

That's it from me.

Now I'm off to bed - about two hours after I was supposed to. :(

Regards,

Madhu





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