[thelist] Critique: www.tryspot.com/tharapita/

[Moe Rubenzahl]

Very nice. My only comment is a concern of whether a visitor will 
understand the point of the site at first glance. Perhaps the real 
content would make it clear but I could not tell from this sample 
page.

For instance, the developer's page says, "tryspot - web development & 
design firm located outside of Toronto." That's clear.

By the way, one more little point is that it bothers me some that the 
developer's page and your page are so similar. It's a nice look but 
disquietingly similar. (Also, you might mention to them they have a 
bad link on their home page! Using Navigation pop-up, leave it set to 
Home and click Go. Oops.)
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Subject: [thelist] Critique: www.tryspot.com/tharapita/
Author: Lauri Vain
Date: 3/9/01 3:29 PM +0200

>Hello everybody,
>
>I would like to receive some critique about www.tryspot.com/tharapita/
>The design of this non-profit project and is not by me, but I am the one who
>ordered the design so I'm interested in what you think about the site.
>
>Feel free to make any suggestions about the layout, colors or anything else.
>One thing you notice that the site is layout only and doesn't yet have any
>content -- most of the text is silly or just repeating words. The text will be
>added once the site is transferred to my server and I pay for it.
>
>Thanks very much and looking forward to your suggestions.
>
>Yours,
>Lauri
>
>
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