[thelist] My very first site check!

Marc Seyon seyon at delime.com
Sat Jul 7 11:40:05 CDT 2001


Hi Jacob,

Looks good. I think you need to check a few grammatical things on the 'who 
we are' page though.

(I) wrangles, (I) programs, (I) dabbles, (I) understands are a few. There 
may be others. It looks like you pulled it from something previously 
written in third person and forgot to change some of the verbs.

regards.
-marc





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