[thelist] site crit requested

[Chris Williams]

Color scheme on Fountain page did not inspire me. There are too many colors,
and they look bland. I am not sure what I am supposed to look at.  On the
same page, the last title on the left falls off (Association).  (It sits
below the picture).  The words soups and salad does not show up....I only
saw it because I accidentally selected it.
http://www.fountainsquareindy.com/food/soda.html


On this page, you are now using a serif font for the word 'soups and
Salads', etc. Also, the menu overpowers the title of the page.
http://www.fountainsquareindy.com/food/lunch.html

I did not like the fact I had no idea what site I was on unless I looked in
the browser.  There is no title to remind me where I am and what site this
is.

I like this page:
http://www.fountainsquareindy.com/events/events_index.asp
I know where I am, the colors are simple, the text is formatted nicely.  I
would arrange the dates in the reverse order to keep the user from having to
scroll to find the current events.

I would add a title to each page, so your user will know where they are....

On this page, I would use a brown duotone for the guy with the drink...the
greeen looks wierd against the color photo on the same page.
http://www.fountainsquareindy.com/rooftop.html


Hard to read the grey text:
http://www.fountainsquareindy.com/directions.html

Great job.  I like the colors used...NIce, simple and clean.

Chris
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just wanting a few basic comments on usability and functionality to help
perhaps in my next endeavor.  a few links are inactive, but for the most
part it is complete...i'd say about 90%.

http://www.fountainsquareindy.com/

tia.

jas
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