[thelist] site check request (for my first interview!)

[Kristof Neirynck]

Timothy J. Luoma wrote:

> My mock-up site is below.
> http://psv.tntluoma.com/churches/gallipolis/

Much better.

A few suggestions for <http://psv.tntluoma.com/contact/>:
* Put "Title" before "Name" or even remove the "Name".
   These people are representatives of a certain function.
   It is the Pope, John Paul and not John Paul, the Pope.
* Get rid of the personal email adresses at once!!!
   These will be bombarded with *SPAM* if you don't.
   Add a mail form if you can or create special email adresses like
   "Executive_Presbyter at presbsciotoval.org".

A few suggestions for <http://psv.tntluoma.com/churches/>:
* The yellow background is a bit strong for a:hover.
   There is nothing wrong with blue-red-purple links.
   Especially since you're going for the minimalistic look.
* The yellow for the h2 is a bit strong too.
* Having a ul you don't need to have a "|" after each item.
   Use a ul like this:
     <ul><li>A</li><li>B</li>...</ul>
   or "|" like this:
     A | B | ...
* The "A | B | ..." links could be repeated at the end of the document.
* The nested ul's for the names could be replaced by a dl.
   <dl>
   <dt>A</dt>
     <dd>Alexander</dd>
     <dd>Amanda</dd>
     <dd>Amesville</dd>
     <dd>Athens First</dd>
   <dt>B</dt>
     <dd>Bainbridge</dd>
     <dd>Bethany</dd>
     <dd>Bethel (Columbus)</dd>
     <dd>Bethel (Oakhill)</dd>
     <dd>...</dd>
     <dd>Brookwood</dd>
   </dl>

A few suggestions for <http://psv.tntluoma.com/pulpitsupply/>:
* Add h3's.
   Changing the tables from this
     <table>
     Retired Clergy      City    Phone
     George Alexander    London  (740) 852-3942
     Phil Ferguson       Powell  (614) 436-4210
     ...
     </table>
   to this
     <h3 id="retired_clergy">Retired Clergy</h3>
     <table>
     Name                City    Phone
     George Alexander    London  (740) 852-3942
     Phil Ferguson       Powell  (614) 436-4210
     ...
     </table>
* Adding anchors and links to them would make it easier to use.
   Active Clergy | Retired Clergy | Certified Lay Supply Preachers | ...

Suggestion for <http://psv.tntluoma.com/presbytery/>
  and <http://psv.tntluoma.com/council/>:
* Add th's.
   It might seem superfluous here.
   But then again it always does.


-- 
Kristof