[thelist] ad help
David Siedband
technique at oceanicsky.com
Sun Nov 28 03:50:12 CST 2004
Alex,
I think you could strengthen the following tagline: "Is your site a
traffic magnet?" The value proposition might not be clear to your
potential clients. Why is more traffic better? Seems to me the value
you're delivering is potential customers. Maybe you could say
something like: "targeted traffic means customers finding you"
--
David Siedband
generation-xml.com
On Nov 26, 2004, at 4:42 AM, Alex Beston wrote:
> hi e-volt
>
> Was wondering if someone could have a look at:
> http://deltatraffic.co.uk/yell-ad/ad.gif
>
> thanks
> Alex
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