[Theforum] Getting back to work

Shirley Kaiser, SKDesigns skaiser1 at skdesigns.com
Thu Jan 10 21:30:14 CST 2002


At 07:14 PM 01/10/2002, Michele Foster typed:

>The site's just about ready to roll over the code on teo to the live site.
>If you want, you can review the final version of the article I've prepared
>for when the code rolls.
>
>http://members.evolt.org/Mishka/art_updates_jan02.htm


Hi, Michele,

Reading along, I found just a few tiny little things to edit:

Article:
  .... Also, a new version of the source code has also been compiled and is 
available from soureforge.

Last word should be spelled sourceforge (the 'c' is missing from the page).
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Then, in the bulleted list under Author Recognition

2nd bullet: directly underneath a graphical representation of the number....

I'd suggest changing that to:
a graphic representation of the number....

The first way I ended up thinking "Directly underneath a graphic 
representation of what?" I don't think the "directly underneath" is necessary.
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4th bullet: date the user registered their evolt.org account;

Should be either
1. date the user registered his/her evolt.org account;
OR
2. date the users registered their evolt.org account;
(user needs to agree with tense of his/her/their)
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Next fix:

under - Other Modifications
Other less-noticeable changes

Should be
Other less noticeable changes (no dash)
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That's it for now. Nice work Michele!

HTH.

Warmly,
Shirley


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