[thesite] Cubes FAQ - Please Review

Filip Salomonsson filip at netdesign.se
Tue Aug 14 17:12:17 CDT 2001

Michele Foster:
> If anyone has any comments/suggestions for the article,
> please let me know.

I think the breakdown may be almost too verbose in its
current form. "Five solid cubes and one wire-framed
cube indicates that this author has written" seems a bit
tautological when combined with the introductory
paragraph and the sample image, and it makes the actual
numbers much less prominent.

It might be that I'm just tired, though. But hey, tired
people should be able to understand it as well. ;-)


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