[thelist] Review my site..... Please

Megan Holbrook meganwh at wi.rr.com
Wed Jan 14 10:07:14 CST 2009

Martyn -

At a very quick glance, your informal home page introduction might be 
better replaced with a paragraph that stresses your high standards, the 
high profile of your clients, the wide range of services you provide, 
and that you cover (all/most?) of the UK. Maybe include more examples of 
projects up front, rather than just a single image.

My initial reaction was that this was probably a website for a smaller 
business, until I saw the page with your clients on it. Overall, I think 
the writing could be more professional. I'd also get rid of the Google 
ads, banner ads, search, etc. at the bottom, which don't belong on a 
business website (and might lead people to other similar contractors to 

HTH, Megan

Martyn wrote:
> Hi Chaps,
> I have had my site up and running since October now, with changes and 
> improvements taking place weekly. I am working my way up google amongst 
> other engines, my problem is I cannot seem to get enough quality 
> traffic, I have tried Adword but the keywords are too expensive (£10-20 
> each) Adcenter is ok but market share is so low, so far I have had no 
> contact whatsoever from the site.
> Any suggestions would be much appreciated     www.medes.org.uk
> Cheers
> Martyn

Megan Holbrook - megan at kapow.com
Partner - Business Development
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