[Theforum] announcement: second take

javier velasco lists at mantruc.com
Thu Oct 24 15:55:24 CDT 2002

Marlene Bruce wrote:
> Thanks for the feedback and questions, everyone. The latest version is below.

marlene, it looks nice

> Ron, what you wrote sounded great (I too was thinking it should be
> linked to). It could be cleaned up a little for public consumption,
> but I don't think it needs to be shortened too dramatically. IOW,
> let's say pretty much the same thing, only a little more crisply.

+10, i thing it would be an article similar to the donation page, linked
from it

> P.S. Should I keep the P.S. below?

sure, it could even not be a P.S., but a last paragraph

thanks again marlene and ron

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